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| This thread is for everyone to post comments and suggestions about stories. Tell us what you like and what needs improvement. | |
| Thanks for the notes on the rules and guidelines. I promise to some of the stories that are up there right now. But there were a few from the old site that I just hated to see die and I wanted to resurrect their world's from cyberspace 'disappearing'. Peace & love, Upnorth. | |
| Do you have Ninja Recreation or Origins of a hero? If so post them too. | |
| thanks for the add, been reading stories and must say they are very good. really look forward to anything new added | |
| Upnorth, I enjoyed reading all three of your stories. It would be hard to pick my favorite story, as they all had their strong points. I thought that your characters' perceptions and reactions to nudism were realistic. While the characters in the stories may be more open-minded towards nudism than the average person, I think a lot of their open-mindedness came from being introduced to nudism by family members and close friends. Also, people did not decide to try nudism until it was their own personal decision. It was clothing-optional, not nude-only. I appreciated that many of the people promoting nudism in the stories were teenagers and women, since these are the groups that typically have the most difficult time embracing the idea of nudism. And ultimately, nudism brought people and families closer together. I thought the stories were well-written, especially the dialogue. It needs a little editing, as I noticed some typos and other minor problems. | |
| i really enjoyed the ending to Cats Out of the Bag. Thanks for good read. | |
| How many of you are familiar with Nemo's "How Kristen spent her summer vacation"? The original story had 24 chapters but left the reader hanging at the beginning of beach season. About 3 years ago, I found the start of a second novel, where Nemo took up the story again. However, he never finished it. I took up the story and finished the novel. If anyone is interested, I have the full first novel that I can post here and the complete second novel as well, including the first seven chapters that Nemo wrote and the rest that I wrote to bring the novel to a satisfactory conclusion. Simon, for your info, volume 1 is presently 202 pages while volume 2 is about 180 pages but that may change if I reformat the documents for this site. EDIT: Sorry, I had quite a few pages doubled up... Volume 1 is only about 130 pages long. Please let me know if you would be interested in having it on-line. | |
| I have read all 24 chapters of the first part and would love to be able to read your addition to it. Please post it. | |
| I posted an update to Upnorth's heat wave story. However, I had the greatest difficulty in following the plot until I copied all the previous posts and corrected the typos. Obviously, Upnorth's software uses a non-standard ASCII conversion. I did very little editing (I only corrected 2 or 3 continuity problems and corrected the grammar a bit.) Simon, if you would wish to, I could upload my corrections and you could replace the text. It would make it much easier to read. | |
| I was reading the other stories, looking for one that I could add to, and I noticed something... In several of the stories, both here and in the previous fiction forums I've been on, all the characters are always thinking, talking or writing about "going in the nude"... It pops up almost every second sentence. Could we get on with it? Once a person is naked, do we have to remind the reader every other paragraph? If these were Westerns, would the hero be checking every fifty feet to see if his colt 45 was fully loaded? I have been in several 'clothes-free' venues and, let's face it, there's the first look; Oh! He's (or she's) naked... OK... fine, let's go talk to him (her). But I've never heard the conversation go... "I see you're naked." "Why, yes I am. You're naked as well... isn't that wonderful... We're both naked, together." And while I'm ranting... Can we find another way of saying it; for me, "nude" rhymes with "prude". Every time I hear the word, I feel icky. | |
| New update to Heat Wave... Unless someone else adds to the current story with a different scenario, I think I'll bring it to a natural conclusion in around 3 to 5 more updates. EDIT: I also posted an update to Bulletin board. Simon, would it be possible to add an icon or symbol to those story arcs that are finished; not necessarily a padlock but something like a closed book? If you go that route, an open book might mean a story that is available for updating. | |
| I haven't seen a way yet to lock topics or add icons. | |
| I enjoyed reading about Kristen. Her character comes off as very real (although very lucky also). It made me wish Black Knife Beach was just down the road here. Cor I think you did a great job of wrapping up all the loose ends. I had a great time reading it. Thanks | |
| No problem; all my updates (not the first entries, just updates) have been averaging 1010 words so far. EDIT: OK, I've trimmed the updates I have in the pipeline to between 990 & a 1000 words. (It's no fun... "a" counts as a word... darn it!) | |
| I just updated "Backpacking". You will notice that this and several future updates deal with criminal and civil law proceedings. I am not familiar with American law (neither on the federal level, nor on how they vary from state to state), nor am I familiar with Canadian law. I will not argue about points like "This is totally false or "this or that amendment says that..." This is fiction, OK? | |
| @ Upnorth; I also had a copy of Living with my aunt but yours is a lot further along. It will be a pleasure for me to tag along after I get through reading all of it. By the way, you might want to edit your first post a little... the scene with the Pizza at the beginning shows up twice - the first time, Jane makes coffee afterwards, the second time, she goes swimming. Might I suggest that you pick one or the other or, if you prefer, cut and paste to join the two. I find that it helps to reread it after posting, I spot mistakes that I've missed in the original file. I've noticed that, even after posting, it is always possible for the author to make corrections. | |
| Crap. When I copied it the first time it went to some funky word processor. Yeah, for posterity's sake I'll look at it. | |
| I love the old stories. Corvds, or anyone else for that matter, has any please post them! Thanx in advance! | |
| I still have a few on file. Some, I don't know what to do with yet, others that I'd like to do over. For instance, I have one; The night she will never forget, that was based on Truth or Dare. When I first saved it from the old site, I thought it was cute but, now, I find the whole 'Truth or Dare' concept mean and degrading, and not at all according to the nudist philosophy I try to live by. I have a good ending but I want to throw out the beginning and start over | |
| For those who might be wondering... in the 'Living with my Aunt' story, there is already a Jaki (the daughter of Barbara, the woman who's commissioning Kelly's art). Because of this, I've "renamed" September's mother as Jacqueline, in order to avoid any confusion. | |
| Corvds thanks for the changes in names in living with my aunt. really enjoy the stories you have all posted. and i await to read future stories, and adds. | |
| @ Upnorth, 1- Re your Bulletin board update, I made a mistake with the names; only 3 people went to Sunny Glade - Sacha, Elizabeth & Greg (I fixed it). Could you please correct the dialogue in your update so that Greg is the only male present for the Chinese food when Michelle walks in? 2- In your Teacher update, please correct Lisa's family name... during arrest, her name was given as 'Cummings' | |
| I took care of it. | |
| @ Upnorth THere's still some loose ends in Bulletin Board. Please see previous comment about GREG (only) & 2 girls at Sunny Glade and Chinese food picnic I've integrated the rest of your scenario into the following update. **Spoiler alert** Be aware I'm planning a final nude hike in two more episodes and ending the story. | |
| @ Upnorth Re: Teacher... You've left me no end of problems; 1st- It was already lunch time when Lisa was arrested so, if anything, it would be close to supper when she would make bail and be released. 2nd- What did you do with her 4 yr old son, Mark? Meredith cannot afford baby-sitters. 3rd- Where did the indecency charge come from? Lisa has always remained completely and properly dressed... 4th- yes, she may be interested in the nudist lifestyle but you're jumping the gun. 5th- I don't think a desk-Sargent would recommend that Lisa fight a trumped up charge this early in the game. Child molesters & pedophiles are a real touchy subject at the moment and the police is much more likely to believe you guilty than innocent. | |
| I think the last few comments show something very important when writing in this group. Before writing a post I suggest going back and rereading the story throughly. That way you avoid many of the problems we've seen. | |
| Rather than rewriting the whole Teacher update, I propose that we simply replace the whole thing with mine. It addresses all the problems I've identified and throws in a new story element that you might find interesting. I am curious about this Venera character... I have no idea where you want to go with that. Would it be possible to keep her in mind for future complications? Please think about it; I will hold off updating Teacher while you do. | |
| I'd like to not delete someone's post if I can help it. I read your comment and tried to edit accordingly. However, if Upnorth agrees to it I will follow your plan. | |
| Corvds- What do you want to do with Teacher? I recognize your issues with it, but I do like the characters that were introduced as well as some of the things that happened. As for Venera, I was thinking she would be maybe Mrs. Crenshaw or maybe a relative of his that was sympathetic to naturism and nudity. | |
| Why not have both a Corvds and an Upnorth1066 version of "The teacher"? I think it would be interesting to read a story with two alternate endings. However, each version of the story would need its own group topic, to avoid confusion. And I promise not to say that I thought one version was "better" than the other. | |
| @ dbo Thanks for the suggestion but I prefer we cooperate instead of trying to outdo one another. @ Upnorth I LIKE the idea of a Crenshaw relative sabotaging his tight-assed posturing. That's a good one. As for the rest, I was going to introduce a male lawyer who is Mark's father. The kicker would be that Meredith would be an Amazon; she likes men but wants to make her way totally alone. I was planning to have Lisa released on her own recognizance with the order to stay away from the school until the trial. Her union would pay a % of her salary, in the meantime. Since she doesn't want to stay alone in apartment, she moves in with Meredith & GRADUALLY adopts life-style. What I could do is insert Venera who pays bail instead but leave Mark's father in place. This could develop into a relationship with Lisa as he comes visit his son. As I said, think about it... If you like, we'll ask Simon to fix up continuity. Also, in future, I would like that we work together on stories in advance a bit like the crossoverkill webcomic series. (see http://www.drunkduck.com/Crossoverkill/index.php) Unfortunately, this forum does not allow private messages | |
| @ Simon, Are you allowed, as group owner, to send e-mails to group members? If so, I would ask you to send Upnorth my e-mail address & if he agrees, send me his address. I don't want to post it here & don't want to pay a monthly fee for a "premium" membership to send private messages when no other forum asks for it (I participate on several, in the States, Canada & in France.) | |
| Yeah, that's fine Simon. Isn't there some way to communicate that on here? | |
| I can't e-mail anyone as I'm not a premium member. Seems the only way we can communicate is here and in the chat room. | |
| Are there any restrictions on genre at all? I am thinking of posting a collaborative story with a science fiction theme. | |
| No there is not. | |
| For those who might be wondering, Upnorh and I have gotten together and we've agreed on a common scenario for Teacher. Each of us will add their own efforts to the story but we will no longer be working at cross-purposes anymore, like a tug-of-war. I have also added the latest and LAST episode to Heat Wave. If anybody wishes to write further episodes using the same characters, please create a new story arc for it. Thank you. | |
| To those people who are following the story "Backpacking", I'd like to apologize because I've hit a bit of a dry spell on that story; as soon as I get a new flow of ideas, I shall get back to it. In the meantime, Upnorth and I are forging ahead full steam with "The Teacher" and with "Glow of Motherhood"... We have pretty well both stories mapped out and while there are still surprises ahead for both of us, we have a good idea as to where we're heading. Enjoy! I have just added the latest and LAST episode to Bulletin boad. If anybody wishes to write further episodes using the same characters, please create a new story arc for it. Thank you. | |
| I see there are forty-one members, but only three are posting. What's it going to take for others to get involved? | |
| I'd like to reply to your comment, if I may. First of all, I'd Like to thank you for your appreciation of 'Heat Wave'... In one sense, I agree with you that Ted flipped towards nudism/naturism easily. However, I have tried to paint him as a modern, intelligent person with little or no ingrained prejudices. I realise... (Sorry, that's my Canadian accent speaking) I realize that this is not the case everywhere and especially not in the U.S. I once saw a map of the voting preferences in the States and I found it incredible how the 'red' (republican) areas matched repressive, 'Bible Belt' reactions against natural innocent nudism by religious leaders. These were the same people who were frequently exposed and/or brought to justice for embezzlement of church funds, sleeping with the parishioners, etc. I do not favor fanaticism of any kind, so I try to keep an open mind and my characters do as well. On another matter, you said you would wish that the episodes be smaller... We are already limited to 1000 words per episode - That is barely two 8 1/2 by 11 pages of double spaced text. Most magazine short stories are at least twice that, if not more. The only reason it appears that long is because of the narrow 4 inch column width of this website. You must remember also that most of these stories are or were at one time multiple author tales... if we were limited to 500 words, say, per episode, it would take forever for the story to come to a satisfactory conclusion. That is the aim, isn't it, to create and describe a universe where we meet several people, learn to know them, see how they react to a situation and thus appreciate the choices they make and bring the story to a conclusion, if it wasn't, it would be much quicker to post some pictures of a bunch of naked people you don't know. | |
| Hay corvds and uphorth 1066 I like the way you writh. But i found some flaws. Backpacking Problem with dialog A bottle of weißer Wein = ( NO ( er ) in weiss wein ) Goeten morgen = guten morgen ( It is NOT the swedish cook from the muppet show ) Ve = Wir Goet = gut Eine million Fumpf Hündred = fünf hundert OR ein kommer fünf millionen Eine halbes = eine ein halb A german will not speak like that, if they try to say someting in english. You making them ( Hermann , Ingrid ) speaking a poorer English late in the story then in the beginning Norse architecture was a way buildings were designed in Scandinavia before and during medieval times.. It is dark , no windows …. Don’t you mean nordic architecture Living with my aunt You can't have nickel in the rings and other things that peopel ware. Here i Europe it is forbidden even in cellphone covers . | |
| Entschuldigen Sie mich, bite... mein Deutsch ist sehr schlecht - ich bin holländisch As for the dialogue, Hermann speaks better English than Ingrid (if you'll go back, You'll notice the difference) and I've tried to maintain the dialog as English with a German accent; Ve instead of We, etc. I will correct the weiss wine & the Guten Morgen... Thank you As for the architecture, you're probably right... I saw the buildings I'm thinking of in Norway, somewhere between Kongsberg and Vinje over 40 years ago. As for the white gold; I quote Wikipedia... White gold is an alloy of gold and at least one white metal, usually nickel, manganese or palladium. Like yellow gold, the purity of white gold is given in karats. White gold's properties vary depending on the metals and proportions used. As a result, white gold alloys can be used for many different purposes; while a nickel alloy is hard and strong and therefore good for rings and pins... In the next paragraph, they DO mention the allergies & I also know that the Germans called Nickel "the Devil's Copper" because of the similarities between their ores. | |
| Again I ask what's it going to take to get people involved writing stories? | |
| A new story contest? Maybe putting up links at clothesfree.com? | |
| am working on a story and have a draft of the first part, an outline of the middle and the last chapter. | |
| The story "The Teacher" is now finished. My thanks to Upnorth and Cor for all their work on it. I'd like to know what everyone thought about this story. | |
| I'm really enjoying many of the stories. I've a couple of different ways to read them. Most I just read as the installments are posted. That can be a problem if I'm reading them on my iPhone; too much scrolling to find my place. On the longer ones (e.g., the Kristen ones), I copied them to a Word file, created a PDF, and transfered it to my Kindle. Anyway, thanks for all you guys do. | |
| Just to let everyone know, I've just added the last post to the 'Glow of Motherhood' story. I DO hope that you've liked what Upnorth and I have been trying to do; create an environment where generalized nudity, as a way of life, is much more natural and comfortable than whatever we have presently. | |
| And... That's it! 'Living with my Aunt' has finally come to a conclusion. It has been a long time coming; almost five years. I hope you enjoyed the ride. At the same time, I have also posted the latest (and last) episode of 'The long Week-end'. I am quite sure that Carl, Laure, Rikki (and, who knows, maybe the young doctor she plays tennis with) will continue to experience life to the fullest and maybe, eventually, I may go back to visit them again but for the moment, we are finished with them Several of you have noticed that Upnorth and I have started posting another story. That one is coming along nicely. It is not completely finished yet (there are some episodes we are not happy with, yet) but we hope to continue uploading as we're doing until the end which should be after about 24 episodes. | |
| Just wanted to know what everyone thought about the latest update to Island Paradise? | |
| I think Island Paradise is a great story line but what is the update? This is the first I've seen of it. | |
| A post was made on it today. But, this story was posted a month or two ago. | |
| Okay everyone, I edited the latest addition to Island Paradise. Hopefully it's easier to read now. | |
| For those people who follow the 'summer Camp' story, we'd like to apologize... through a technical error, the last two episodes were not uploaded in sequence. We had episode 25 coming in ahead of episode 24. This did not alter the direction the story was headed but, I believe, would have created some confusion because the episodes are chronological. Please be assured that the story is now fixed and please reread the last three episodes to savor the full extent of the coffee... er, no, the story. Thank you | |
| I enjoy reading all these stories and am getting into "Full Circle". Just one comment on this story. In the early chapter Jud talks to Sally about the move to the camp. In the latest episode Jud arrives with Molly. Should Molly be Sally? Norman | |
| Norman, my error. I will correct that. Thanks. | |
| I have finished Arc One. I will be starting Arc Two in a couple days, so if anyone has suggestions or wants to get in on the fun, drop me a line. | |
If Bigbare wants to make a seperate thread with his version of the story he can do that as long as either makes it a single author story or follows the four day rule. However I feel posting an alternate version of a story within the main story would be too confusing. That's why I've been removing them. | |
| calmnude, I just wanted to let you know I am really enjoying "Full Circle"!! You had me hooked pretty quick; I usually check daily for any additions to the story. Good job! | |
| Marty, thanks for the support. I hope to keep you and others interested in my tale. | |
| @ Bigbare; Hi, I'm reading your Oren story but it's difficult to follow... Would you please go back in and edit your post? Unlike the story title, it is ALWAYS possible for the original poster to correct typing errors or make other changes (I once changed a name in one story about 3 weeks after posting) The forum software has a tendency to remove extra spaces & to reformat text (making it difficult to read). It would help if you would add an extra 'enter' between lines of dialogue & other paragraphs to separate them. Thank you | |
| I wanted to take this time to ask you all for your help. I am a bit stuck with Origins of a hero. I have ideas, but before I put them down I want to get two things out of the way. Namely a superhero name and the job she has as part of her secret idenity. Just note, that even before my story got accused of copying Superman, I have not intention of her being a reporter. | |
| I would suggest that because of her green hair, she should be named either Jade or Emerald. As for her job, why not have her own a small gift shop that specializes in inexpensive but good quality imports? In any event, she should own her own business so that she could easily get away any time that she is needed. Possibly she could own or manage a small nudist resort. | |
| Thanks, I will definitly think about what you've suggested. Although there is already a character in the DC universe name Jade. | |
| That still leaves Emerald as a possibility. | |
| When I can find them I like to read about naked in public or naked in school. I "found" a cute story about a solar event that made it painful to wear clothes. Laws were passed to overturn anti nudity laws. So the entire world was nude. Would love to find it again if anyone has the info. | |
| Have not read the story, but is one close to that storyline http://home.comcast.net/~rich.in.oregon/The_London_Flu.htm | |
| Thanks beark. It is similar in that it caused kids at least to go nude. Funny stuff thanks again. | |
| Seventy-seven members and only two posting. What's the deal? | |
| I don't know about the others but Upnorth and I are putting the finishing touches to a novel that will clock in at some 90 000 words. We have some 95% of it completed and ready for posting. Upnorth is in the process of writing the last 2 or 3 chapters then we will start uploading. | |
| Great. My little pulp serial is getting lonely. | |
| A good story lordshipmayhem. Post also "Sister's last resort" ,nearly rolled of the sofa. When I read it.. | |
| I loved the first installment of your story lordshipmayhem. I wish I had the skills to add to the storyline. I have also enjoyed reading "San Frescesco". I look forward to the daily, or more frequent installments. Just wanna say thank you to all the writers. Jim | |
| I remember San Francesco from years ago, and was sorry I hadn't saved it when it was no longer available. I could see all sorts of side stories arising out of it, as others on the island adapted to the new nude dress code. Thanks for posting it up, and for finishing it off. As for Sister's Last Resort, I'll happily post that three-chapter short story up, if nobody objects. | |
| I'd love to read it, lordshipmayhem. Jim | |
| I am very gratified that lordshipmayhem has started posting a story as well. What pleases me most is that, just like for newbies in a naturist venue, once you get over the first-day jitters and start 'letting it all hang out', the stories are excellent. To Lordship, as well as anyone else who is thinking about writing stories and are looking for possible naturist venues in France, I know that Cap d'Agde is universally known. However, you should know as well that, since several years, Cap d'Agde has been going downhill, as swingers have invaded and gradually taken over the place. It has gotten to the point that long-time residents no longer dare to go out at night and, even during the day, there have been full-blown orgies on the beach. | |
| I'm sorry to hear that about Cap D'Agde. It sounds like the local upholders of law and order have been remiss in the performance of their duties - or absent completely. | |
| I have to say that I am grateful that Corvds and Upnorth are re-posting and have completed San Francesco. I thoroughly enjoyed that which Corvds had managed to write back on that previous, now-deceased website, and look forward to the resolution of this story. Keep it up, guys!! | |
| And with that, "Sister's Last Resort" is finished. No long-winded, dramatic tale, just a short tale filled with some light humour. I hope you enjoy it. If you got a chuckle out of it, then it did its job. If it inspires anyone else here to create and put up their own efforts, so much the better. | |
| Thank you for the enjoyable story. Sisters Last Resort was a fun read. | |
| Ups Upnorth 1066 , You have posted --- Episode 52 – Robert Graves @ hotel IN San Francesco. Corveds have posted the same the 6. january. It is a really god story, like San Francesco very much. | |
| Six hundred and fifty posts. I want to thank everyone who has made this possible. Here's to hoping that we grow more and more people post stories. | |
| I have to say I'm excited by lordshipmayhem's new story. I'm looking foward to see how it goes. | |
| To all my readers, I would like to thank you all for your continued interest in my stories. I try to show everything in a positive light while remaining solidly grounded in reality. This is why I sometimes show the darker side of things but it is only to allow us to appreciate the good. @luxorsecurity, Thank you, as well, luxor. I've noticed that you have been reading me for quite a while. I must ask you, however, to post your comments in this section and NOT in the story itself as Simon will simply erase it. | |
| Thanks Cordvds for the friendly reminder. As I did say at the end of the Montessori story I enjoyed it very much ass well as learned about the Montessori program too. I'd always just assumed it was a name as opposed to a learning style designed to challenge youthful minds and encourage greater learning as opposed to the lock-step design of public schools. Jim | |
| Show and Tell is now finished. I hope everyone liked this little tale. | |
| I really did enjoy the story. I know it's fiction and represents the way we would like things to be. As I told a co-worker today, I wish I could roam my neighborshhod (and beyond really) totally nude with absoute acceptance by everyone, whether they would choose to be nude or not. I'll bet many would if they knew there'd be no negative feedback. Jim | |
| Good story. Hope to be reading more from you. Thanks much. | |
| OK, here's a little tale I wrote many, many moons ago. In fact, I think it might be the first Naturist story I ever wrote. I'd like to think my skill at the craft has improved since scribbling this. With Star Gazing, we have an eccentric professor of astronomy, a whole bunch of equally eccentric students, and a young lady going off with them on a field expedition for the first time. It's intended to be light and amusing, and to show how someone who has never tried naturism before might react to her first time. | |
| And the all-to-brief tale is now up in its entirety. I hope everyone found it amusing. | |
| I certainly enjoyed it, as I do all stories about the naturist/nudist way of life presented in a positive light. I truly wish society, a a whole, would accept naturism/nudism as normal. Jim | |
| Toto's Girls is now finished. It coincides in 'real time' to what is going on over at "Full Circle". I may or may not add periodic updates to the adventures of the women from Paradise on the Plains. Their Full Circle appearances are in Arcs Seven and Eight I hope you enjoyed it. | |
| You might want to add a brief note telling future readers where this fits within the "Full Circle" stories, just so they can refer. Your main story will probably soon zoom right past this spot. | |
| I just want to encourge people to write more. Either start a new story or work on one's that are already up. | |
| Mr. Speers, Thank you for this short story; it is simple and a pleasure to read. I was wondering... may I borrow it? I'm a moderator on a French Canadian naturist forum at naturistesduquebec dot com which also has a Reading Room. I have translated most of my stories, as well as several of Upnorth's and Lordship Mayhem's, with their approval, of course, and I would like to translate and publish yours as well. It is my policy to credit the original author and to send him a PDF copy of the translation as proof that I did not distort the story in any way. Since I'm not a premium member, I doubt that you can send me a message directly (I'm not really sure how that policy works - maybe you will be able to contact me but I can't contact you) but if you can't, Simon will gladly give you my e-mail address. As soon as I have your OK & e-mail, I will translate the story and mail it back to you. | |
| I would be flattered if you translated and re-published it -- with credit ;). Please go right ahead. | |
| You will find your story @ http://www.naturistesduquebec.com/t2546-histoire-naturiste-snooze-par-dan-speers#25372 It was my pleasure to read it and to allow others to read it as well I will leave it up in the general access section of the forum for a week & then transfer it to the archives. The archives contain several stories, in french, that are not posted here. Please note that to visit the archives, you will need to become a member of the NdQ forum (a simple no-cost, log-on procedure. We do have premium members but all that is required for that is for an existing member to confirm having met you at a naturist event). | |
| Does any one know of any other naturist fiction sites? I myself know of a couple but these are either stagnant or do not correspond to the family-oriented naturism that we prefer. I was thinking that a deal might be struck where acceptable stories be 'reblogged' here. This would provide the double advantage of granting the stories a wider audience and also spread the word for this site. For those who might be interested, Will Forest, the author of "Co-ed naked Philosophy" just posted a piece about me in his Nude Scribe blog... < http://nudescribe.blogspot.ca/2012/07/disrobing-suspense-cor-van-de-sande.html > | |
| "SunnyDay" have on her homepage http://www.sunnydaynew.bravehost.com/myfriends.html Stories from real life and some fiction (in to the mist). Found a storie on cat`s chat. http://www.chatbocks.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=5619 R.F., Alone. http://www.chatbocks.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=5596 Chloe, In Confidence Part 1 http://www.chatbocks.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=5662 Chloe, In Confidence Part 2 Rediscoveret this link , if someone wants inspiration to some stories http://web.archive.org/web/20071231122621/www.nakedfiction.net/1.htm | |
| I would like to apologize for my recent slowdown in posting entries. I have personal issues to deal with (not life threatening) which are taking up a lot of my time. The outlines for the remainder of "Full Circle" are done. There are also ideas for a few stories that are only in the planning stages, much shorter ones. Corvds, good idea. A variety of contributions would be welcome. Thanks for your patience. | |
| Calmnude, I hope you'll be able to satisfactorily resolve the issues. I do look forward to your stories once they resume. However, take care of yourself and family first. Jim | |
| If some of you want to read the naturist stories on Cat's chat. Now 8 stories about Scott, Chloe , Jess, their families and friends. Can only recommend them. sirius631 is really good author. Hope for many more stories from his hand / pen / keyboard .. :-) http://www.chatbocks.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=5884 | |
| Hy sirius631 Welcome As I have written before I like you stories. Hope for many more stories from You. I have a small commet to your stories. Read : Rules and guidelines (last post Nov. 24 2011 ) It is § 5 . About singel writer stories . You forgot to write is a singel author story. I don't minde, but it is a rule. | |
| Thanks for the tip, beark. It's a pity that there is no pinning facility on this forum software. I'm sure Simon would have pinned something as important as that if he could. Oh, thanks also for the thumbs up. I'll also repeat my thanks to Cor for much valued input on my Cat's Chat postings. All my episodes in the Chloe series have been combed over pretty thoroughly before they get here. | |
| I have to say I enjoyed the tale of Chloe and friends. I hope that Part 10 isn't the last of them. I'd lost my bookmarks when my computer's hard drive decided to commit seppuku earlier this summer, and from your post on the Cat's Chat board, I was able to recover Naturist-Fiction.com Thanks!! And I remember naturist-fiction.net - like sirius, I put a few stories up there (Star Gazing and IIRC, Sister's Last Resort, for two). I was briefly a moderator there, until it vanished like the morning dew. I also put them up on Storiesonline.net, a story site which includes more explicit material - I'm not happy about sharing "G" rated naturist stories on a site with stories like that, but as sites like this forum hadn't started at the time, I felt I had very little choice. | |
| Part 10 (Near Fatal) is not the end. I suppose I telegraphed that with the title ;-). The next episode 'Messages' is up on Cat's Chat. I'll repost it soon, after it's been checked over by other eyes. If I can, I'd like to keep the series going until the main characters go to university or get jobs. | |
| I've just read 'Snooze'. Loved it! If ever there's a concept that's crying out to be a poem, that is it. | |
| @Simon. Perhaps you'd like to paste this at the top of your Cousins post. "by Richard, George, Kristin, Gar, David, and Bernd" Does the four day rule apply to reposting stores that were on old sites? | |
| Yes it does. Althought, my intent was to see if people could or would take old stories in new directions. That's why I didn't post the whole story to begin with. | |
| Although the original is one of those "everyone is getting naked" stories, it is fun, and it would be a pity to lose the original whilst waiting for the rewrite. | |
| I posted the start of a new story today. This story is called "Curse of the Water Meter". It is going to be a stand alone story and, unlike the Chloe series, it's going to be posted here first. Although I've posted the first two installments, I intend to take this one slowly; posting perhaps two updates a month. | |
| I've re-edited the shower scene in 'Near Fatal'. Even though it doesn't have the emotional impact of the original, at least it shows at whom those emotions were directed. | |
| I saw it and edited it out. All stories in this group are suppose to be PG, that includes language. Any cursing beyond hell, damn and ass will be removed. | |
| Thanks to Upnorth1066 for adding to the 'Cousins' story, taken from an old site. I hope you're going to post more again. | |
| Hey Sirius, hope too. I like the story. But I have a few things going on now. So should be back fully in the groove soon. | |
| I had a bit of a brainwave and decided to cross-over characters from my stand-alone story 'Curse of the Water Meter' into my latest episode in the stories of Chloe and Scott. This has prompted me to push on a little with the C.O.T.W.M. story. | |
| Message to Upnoth1066. I'm reading San Francesco and have come upon a discrepancy between chapters 6 & 10. In chapter 6 it is established that ther is no milk. In chaper 10, however, Alex is making pancakes. Don't pancakes need milk for the batter? You might want Ely to explain in chapter 6 that she needs to conserve the milk supply, or have he drop a carton of milk into the cooler when she arrives. | |
| I have already replied to Sirius by e-mail but since this is a public forum, I may as well say it here as well. Mea Culpa! It is my mistake, not upnorth's. However, as I proposed to Sirius, we could sweep it under the rug quite easily. Since Alex carries a fair bit of freeze-dried foodstuffs, let us suppose he had with him some instant pancake batter, the kind where all you add is water, with him (I'll avoid mentioning the name of a well-known brand with the drawing of a black woman on the box, Ha! Ha!). That way, Alex would not need to premix some powdered milk to make them. | |
| All will be pleased to hear that 'Invasion' is now complete, subject to spotting mistakes. I have three stories left in the Chloe series. I'm actually further on with the last one, so I'd better get a bit of disciplin and concentrate on the first one of the three. | |
| Just want to encourage everyone to write more. | |
| My House, My Rules. Awesome start, great background material and lead-in. Looking forward to additional episodes. I hope you include not only points of acceptance, but also those staunch opponents to the whole project. Keep it going and great work. | |
| I really liked where "The Curse of the Water Meter is going but it has been a long time since there has been anything further put up on this one. I would really like to see this one finished. Thanks for you talents and imagination! | |
| Thanks Firezman, 'Curse of the Water Meter' has been on the back burner for too long whilst I completed the 'Chloe, In Confidence' series. That series is now complete, and I'll be uploading the final episodes here over the next few days. After that I'll concentrate on geting 'Curse' completed. Cheers, David. | |
| Good job Sirius, like the writing! | |
| Thanks Dave88, I'll be uploading the final episode of the C,IC series today. It's entitled Champs Élysées. | |
| I got all of the Chloe stories read and they were very good and kept me going to get them read to see what was next. Very good series keep up the good writing. | |
| 'When In Rome...' Very good story, like all your stories. I found a few errors / mistakes. " “Guess,” replied Tom. “Actually… when Brett goes down for breakfast, in a minute or so, " "Brett = Marcus ? " “Ihr Freund hat die Manieren von ein Hund,” said Andrea. “Er ist nicht mein Freund,” replied Tom. " " Ihr " Have to be "Dein" if it is only Tom's OR "Euer" if it is Tom's and Paul's friend And is both tom's dad and cousin , name Anthony ? Hope you will write many more stories. | |
| Thanks for your concern, Rusty, but I'm grateful for the corrections. Beark, I deliberately used Marcus's surname because Tom is not on friendly terms with him. Cor and I had debated the dog manners sentence but for other reasons. My German is probably not as good as Cor's, but I thought it important for the story. Tom's German male cousin is named after Tom's father. | |
| As you may notice, I removed my post for concern of starting a flame session. Please keep posting your stories for everyones enjoyment. Rusty | |
| I started reading Assault at Sunrise and I find the context of political manoeuvring an interesting subject. However, I'm having some trouble following the story. From the 1st episode, I had gotten the impression that Val was a cop (Jill's ex was Val's partner in the 3rd div. of LAPD). In episode 2, he seems to be chief decision-maker for the light rail extension along the I-80. And who is this Victor Able Val was jogging with (for a second, I thought he was heading for some map coordinates)? | |
| About the Story “Attack at Dawn”:/ This may be fiction, but it has a lot of factual references in it and it also hits pretty close to home. This story is practically in my back yard. I grew up in Fresno, have traveled highways 99, 395, and I-80 extensively, previously lived in Los Angeles, have visited San Diego, Vacaville, Napa, Lodi, Lake Tahoe, Richmond, and Sacramento and currently live in the Bay Area. One of my college roommates was from Lodi. I work for BART and my brother-in-law works for Cal Trans, the California Department of Transportation, and both of us are involved in public transit. My father worked for the Fresno Bee, a sister publication to the Sacramento Bee and the Modesto Bee. Carrows is a nice restaurant and I have eaten at several of them. I do not know of any naturist resorts near Sacramento actually on a river, but Laguna del Sol is southeast of Sacramento a few miles and has a lake, but no river. The American River goes through Auburn, about 40 miles northeast of Sacramento and is alongside the I-80 highway. No personal experience in that river but there are white-water rafting expeditions that pass by a beach that has recently made the news because of some nude sun bathing. The reference to California State Highway Officer is pretty close, they are actually California State Highway Patrol Officers, and are charged with protecting state officials and state property in addition to patrolling the state's highways. Protecting the governor at a nude resort would certainly be one of their responsibilities. The only thing that is odd is not having a partner for Officer Dennis Cole, surely there must be some young lady in the CHP willing to play the part. The Northern and Southern California divide is quite real and there has been talk of dividing the state somewhere around Bakersfield, but it has only been talk for the past fifty years that I can remember. Some people claim it should have been divided in 1851 when it was admitted into the Union. | |
| Corvds, About "Assault at Sunrise. I think you must have missed a section of the story. Val is indeed an LAPD cop and in a later story he transfers to Sacramento. He is not the champion of the light rail. That discussion is explained by Victor Able, the Governor of California. He and his wife are members of the Sunrise Naturist Club. New_Adventurer, You are exactly right this is fiction and I take lots of license. In other words it is not exactly as things are in Northern CA. I lived in the Bay Area for almost 20 years and have been around most of the places mentioned in the story. I thought a light rail expansion through the I80 right-of-way would make an interesting story about different views of the same problem. I have a couple of additional stories about the lives of these characters and if there is any interest I will post them. | |
| Corvds, I see the problem--I went back and reread the story and a major section is missing. I tried to load the story once and the moderator removed it because it was too long. I then segmented it and reloaded it and during all of this part of the story went missing. I'm not sure how to correct it except by deleting the whole thing and beginning again. I suppose I could load the missing part at the end but that would be hard to read for sure. I'll think about this and try to get it done correctly. | |
| Cantrade, I for one would definitely be interested in reading the additional stories you referred to. Jim | |
| O.K. First I'll get "Assault" fixed and complete. I'm stuck in Dallas now but I should be able to work on it tomorrow or the next day. Then I'll post the others. | |
| Corvds I added the lost part of the first section "Friday" to the post. Try reading it again and I think you will find that the characters begin to make sense. Sorry for the mistake--I have no idea how it happened. | |
| @ Cantrader, Thank you... Now it makes sense. I would like to ask you something. I am a member of the Board of Directors of the Federation of Quebec Naturists, the French-Canadian equivalent of the AANR (see http://www.vivrenu.ca/ca.html for proof). I regularly translate and post interesting short stories with a naturist slant for our members. In the past, I have already translated several of lordshipmayhem's stories as well as those of Sirius631. If I may, I would dearly like to translate yours as I do not have any "police-themed" stories in my collection. Should you agree, I will send you a PDF copy of my translation for your approval as part of my standard policy. Since I am not a premium member of NudistClubhouse, we will not be able to exchange private messages, however you may send me an e-mail at cornelis.vandesande@fqn.qc.ca to discuss details. At the moment, I am in the process of modifying the FQN forum/blog site so I would not be able to post your story before mid-February but it would be the first to go on-line when the site will be ready. | |
| Is anyone interested in a group written story? I was thinking that someone would start with a chapter and then others could add to the story with their own twist to the plot. Not sure how to coordinate the entries though. Cantrade | |
| In the past, I have participated in several such attempts and most have met with failure... When these stories are written in real time, a story may develop along a good premise and, all of a sudden, without necessarily meaning to, one author will go off on a tangent, and the story's cohesiveness, if I can use this word to describe it, dies. This nearly happened to my own story, Teacher, when Upnorth popped in at about the 4th episode. Luckily we came to an understanding and after a few person-to-person e-mails, we worked out a script and alternated episodes. I can only recommend that, if you wish to go that route, you come to an understanding prior to starting the story. | |
| I have considered the subject of group writing and think you are right. It would be very cumbersome to arrange the sections, etc. I think it is probably not a good idea at this time. Cantrade | |
| Juhooo. After a long time of inactivity, there again. New stories on http://www.naturist-fiction.com/ | |
| A note. Going through some personal matters and have been distracted. The long running old story will be back soon. | |
| Good luck, Calmnude. I hope that the situation resolves, and favourably, within a short period of time. | |
| beark - an interesting tale thus far. Looking forward to Parte the Seconde. |
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